Paige,
Your analysis work for the research process is excellent and easily fits into the top grade boundary (16-20). The consistency of you work is very good and the only aspect I feel that you could improve is your magazine industry post. I have added a comment on this post to give you some pointers of what you should add.
You have added a font mood board but the colour mood board is missing - this needs to be added ASAP. You should be adding a short summary for each of you mood boards as well. This should relate to your target audience and should describe how the mood board fits into their lifestyle and represents them.
You are also missing a few other posts in your research and planning work - have a check through your tick list and completing this and making sure everything is up to date will be your Xmas work.
You have made very progress to date and have the potential to earn a top grade boundary mark for your coursework but the research and planning is only 20% of this, make sure your 3 products come up to the same standard. Well done so far - keep it up!
Carl.
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